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General edits to the using poky and Extending Poky chapters.
authorScott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Thu, 28 Oct 2010 21:29:17 +0000 (14:29 -0700)
committerRichard Purdie <rpurdie@linux.intel.com>
Thu, 4 Nov 2010 20:20:06 +0000 (20:20 +0000)
commit4b7f1eee28dafcb237f54e1739a9936fdd80ebc4
treed1effcc12a6d0fd878a57b1034bf3ddb74c5eb6f
parent30e92723e12558cf26c941fcdeb18b7e6ac427e3
General edits to the using poky and Extending Poky chapters.

I completed general edits to the second chapter of the poky reference
manual.  These edits went from section 2.4.5 through the end of the
chapter.  They consist of text rewrites for more active voice and follow
general technical writing principles.

I completed the same types of edits in the third chapter of the manual
from the beginning through section 3.3.2.

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
documentation/poky-ref-manual/extendpoky.xml
documentation/poky-ref-manual/usingpoky.xml